This task from the Regents Examinations was released in 2000.
UNITED STATES HISTORY AND GOVERNMENT DOCUMENT-BASED ESSAY
Directions: Using information from the documents provided, and your knowledge of United States history, write a well-organized essay that includes an introduction, several paragraphs, and a conclusion.
Historical Context
After the Civil War, the United States became a much more industrialized society. Between 1865 and 1920, industrialization improved American life in many ways. However, industrialization also created problems for American society.
Task
Using information from the documents and your knowledge of United States history, write an essay in which you:
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of industrialization to American society between 1865 and 1920. In your essay, include a discussion of how industrialization affected different groups in American society.
Guidelines
Be sure to:
Address all aspects of the Task by accurately analyzing and interpreting at least four documents
Incorporate information from the documents in the body of the essay
Incorporate relevant outside information throughout the essay
Richly support the theme with relevant facts, examples, and details
Write a well-developed essay that consistently demonstrates a logical and clear plan of organization
Introduce the theme by establishing a framework that is beyond a simple restatement of the Task or Historical Context and conclude the essay with a summation of the theme
Specific Rubric
Title: Industrialization of American Society, 1865–1920 Rubric
Advantages of Industrialization
Disadvantages of Industrialization
How Industrialization Affected Different Groups
Increase in GNP (1) Increased urbanization (1) Decreased infant mortality rate (1) More high school graduates (1) More telephone usage (1) Increase in steel production (1) Industrial combinations have benefits to consumers, stockholders and laborers (6) Big businessmen acquire wealth which can be used for philanthropy (7)
Child labor (1) Need for protection of wage-worker and conditions (2) Poor living conditions in industrial society (3) Poor working conditions in a sweatshop (4) Implications that industrial combinations hurt “competitors” (6)
Child labor (1,4) Farmer (1) Need for and goals of labor union (2) Female labor (4) Poor lifestyle of working people (3,5) Rich businessmen (5,6,7) Lifestyle of the rich (5,7)
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Thoroughly discusses the following three tasks for the same time period 1865–1920
At least two advantages of industrialization (see above chart)
At least two disadvantages of industrialization (see above chart)
How two or more specific groups were affected by industrialization (see above chart)
Examples of How Groups Were Affected
Working people/labor
Low pay, unsafe working conditions
Need for labor unions to protect them
Need for laws prohibiting unsafe work conditions
Child labor
Lack of education
Mistreatment
Unsafe working conditions
Note: The discussion of how industrialization affected different groups in American society can extend beyond the time period 1865–1920 as long as the examples used have their origins within this time period.
Discussion includes accurate interpretation of at least four of the documents (see above chart)
Incorporates information from the documents in the body of the essay
Incorporates relevant outside information
Possible Examples
Names of specific labor unions, such as the American Federation of Labor (AFL)
Names of relevant Supreme Court cases such as Northern Securities Co. v. U.S. and Lochner v. NY
Effects of new machinery/technology
Building skyscrapers, bridges, battleships
Names of types of specific trusts and monopolies such as J. D. Rockefeller’s Standard Oil Trust and/or horizontal and vertical combinations
Richly supports the theme with the use of many relevant facts, specific examples, and details
Is a well-developed essay, consistently demonstrating a logical and clear plan of organization.
The plan of organization will generally take one of two approaches:
The student will discuss advantages, then disadvantages, of industrialization and then the impact upon two groups, or
The student will discuss advantages and disadvantages of industrialization upon one group and then discuss advantages and disadvantages of industrialization upon a second group.
Introduces the theme by establishing a framework that is beyond a simple restatement of the Task or Historical Context and concludes with a summation of the theme.
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Discusses all three tasks, although the discussion of one task may be less complete than the discussion for the other two tasks
Discussion includes accurate information from at least four documents in the body of the essay
Incorporates relevant outside information
Uses relevant facts, specific examples and details, but discussion may be more descriptive than analytical
Is a well-developed essay, demonstrating a logical and clear plan of organization
Introduces the theme by establishing a framework that is beyond a simple restatement of the Task or Historical Context and concludes with a summation of the theme
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Addresses most aspects of the Task or addresses all aspects of the Task in a limited way. May discuss only two of the tasks; i.e., advantages of industrialization, disadvantages of industrialization, or how specific groups were affected by industrialization
Uses or refers to some of the documents in the body of the essay
Incorporates little or no relevant outside information
Includes some facts, examples, and details, but discussion is more descriptive than analytical
Is a satisfactorily developed essay, demonstrating a general plan of organization. Essay may not distinguish between advantages and disadvantages of industrialization or specific groups
Introduces the theme by repeating the Task or Historical Context and concludes by simply repeating the theme
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Attempts to address some aspects of the Task such as only discussing disadvantages of industrialization
Makes limited use of the documents—discussion may only restate contents of documents
Presents no relevant outside information
Includes few facts, examples and details; discussion may contain some inaccuracies
Is a poorly organized essay, lacking focus; could contain digression or extraneous information
Fails to introduce or summarize the theme
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Shows limited understanding of the Task with vague, unclear references to the documents
Presents no relevant outside information
Includes little or no accurate or relevant facts, details, or examples
Attempts to complete the Task, but demonstrates a major weakness in organization
Fails to introduce or summarize the theme
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Fails to address the Task, is illegible, or is a blank paper