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Chapter 5
Painting with Words: Imagery
In This Chapter
➤ “No ideas but in things.”
➤ Show, don’t tell
➤ Using the five senses
➤ Avoiding abstractions
➤ How to create an image
 
 
Imagery is like a tour guide the poet hires to help show the reader around his or her poem. This tour guide points out things along the journey, like the way something looks or sounds, and maybe even why it looks and sounds that way. The tour guide should have a lot to do, helping the reader to see the “Kodak moments” in the poem; if the tour guide is off drinking coffee and flirting with the tourists, you may have some work to do with imagery!
An image is a “picture” a poet creates for the reader. The “picture” is not always visual, but it should be sensory, meaning that a poet uses one or more of the five senses to create images that should, in turn, invoke a sensual response in the reader. Our only contact with the world beyond ourselves is through our senses; a poet using sensory images in a poem indeed wields a powerful tool.

No Ideas but in Things

Poet William Carlos Williams said that there are “No ideas but in things.” Williams meant that the things of our world, nouns, should comprise a good part of a poem, not ideas. You can’t see, touch, hear, smell, or taste an idea, can you? Can you touch, hear, or taste suffering, happiness, or love? These are concepts—ideas—that hold various associations for the reader. Why leave the associations to chance? Some readers might associate suffering with war, while others might associate it with running out of pistachio ice cream. Which of these do you mean? You lead the reader to your poem’s intention by showing what you mean with images.

Show, Don’t Tell

You may have heard the phrase “show, don’t tell” if you’ve ever been in a writing workshop. Perhaps you’ve presented a poem to a workshop or a friend and they thought your poem was about fishing at high tide on Miami Beach, when you intended the poem to be about the mating rituals of Barn Owls. What went wrong? It’s possible you didn’t use any imagery at all or you weren’t specific enough in your use of it. Imagery helps the reader understand your poem by remembering through their senses. For a good poet creating good images, a thing can equal an idea. After all, you are writing about something—probably an idea or concept. You will show it through images.
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The more abstract your concept for the poem, the more precise your imagery should be. Here’s a poem by Emily Dickinson that uses an abstraction, “hope,” as the concept for the poem, but uses bird imagery to make “hope” concrete and tangible. “Hope” takes on the properties of a bird, and Dickinson has done her job—you will not mistake “hope” for anything else.
[Hope is the thing with feathers]
Hope is the thing with feathers
that perches in the soul
and sings the tune
without the words
and never stops at all.
And sweetest in the gale is heard;
And sore must be the storm
That could abash the little bird
That kept so many warm.
I’ve heard it in the chillest land,
And on the strangest sea;
Yet, never, in extremity,
It asked a crumb of me.
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Touchstones
Poetry is the synthesis of hyacinths and biscuits.
—Carl Sandburg
 
 
 
 
 
 
Even if your poem relies heavily on ideas, you are obligated to help your reader understand your poem. You are not the maker of puzzles. If you want to confuse people, go to work for the government. If your reader is baffled, you’ve not done your job as a poet. One precise image is worth pages and pages of ideas.
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Dodging Doggerel
Don’t use too many abstractions unless you couple them with concrete images. For the lovers of abstraction: You can get away with using abstractions if your poem is laden with images—the more concrete imagery you use, the more abstractions you can use! You might write “I feel pain” but if you couple that abstract concept with “because I cut my thumb off chopping onions” the reader is more apt to understand the type of pain you’re trying to write about.

Literal and Figurative Images

Literal images mean that the poet describes a thing itself, literally, as he or she perceives it. For example, “The granite boulder, half buried in the red clay soil” is a literal description of the stone and its locale.
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Touchstones
Poetry is fact given over to imagery.
—Rod McKuen
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Poetically Correct
An abstraction is a word that represents an idea rather than a thing, such as love, honesty, pain, hate, sorrow, hope, etc. A concrete word represents a specific condition, thing, or idea; referring to something particular and specific, not abstract.
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Touchstones
An ‘Image’ is that which presents an intellectual and emotional complex in an instant of time.
—Ezra Pound
Figurative images mean that the poet likens the thing he or she is describing to something else, usually using a metaphor or simile. For example, “The pigeon-colored boulder, buried like a gravestone in the ruddy earth.” Here, the stone is compared loosely to a pigeon and to a gravestone, and the word “ruddy” implies “blood.” A figurative image can often hold more associations than a literal image.

Abstract vs. Concrete

Abstractions are those words that have huge meanings that we can’t easily perceive and sometimes can’t even define: love, death, hope, anger, pain, sorrow, etc. Nothing is specifically sensory about these words—their meanings are large and leave a lot to interpretation.
Concrete words are things that we can perceive with our senses: beach ball, schnauzer, rain, light bulb, watermelon, thermometer. We can see, feel, hear, smell, and taste these things (please don’t taste a schnauzer!).
Abstractions may be necessary in order for you to compose your poem. However, long strings of abstractions are tiresome, and do not serve your poem well. Because they mean so much, they are essentially meaningless in your poem; the reader will place his or her associations onto the abstraction and your intention may be lost. Poetry is about precision, and abstractions are anything but precise.
Try to use a variety of concrete images in your poems. A poem with a multitude of sensory images is a delight to read, while a poem relying heavily on abstractions is a bore.

The Five Senses

You probably learned in kindergarten about the five senses: sight, touch, taste, smell, and hearing. These are the tools you use to create your images. Beginning poets often choose one or two of the senses, while neglecting the others. Try to use all of them if you can (but not necessarily every one in each poem!).
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Poet Frank O’Hara (1926-1966) worked at the Museum of Modern Art in New York City and was involved in the art world for much of his adult life. Many of his poems were written in the spare moments away from work, some at lunchtime, and as a result they are often short and highly imagistic, detailing the city and its events. O’Hara was also greatly influenced by the art he admired, and some of his poems address painting directly. He was run down by a dune buggy on Fire Island when he was just 40 years old, and many of his poems were published posthumously.

Visual Imagery

Since, for most of us, sight is the primary sense we use to navigate the world, it follows naturally that most poets use a lot of visual imagery in their poems. Visual imagery describes how something looks, and enables the reader to visualize the objects or actions in a poem. Here’s a poem by William Carlos Williams that uses a solitary visual image as its primary strategy:
The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
 

a red wheel
barrow
 

glazed with rain
water
 

beside the white
chickens
 
In this poem, Williams paints a word-portrait of the wheelbarrow for the reader. Can you imagine what the rest of the scene looks like? Could you draw a picture of it?

Auditory Imagery

Auditory imagery tries to capture a sound on paper, usually using a comparison to do so. The following poem by William Butler Yeats uses at least one auditory image or description in each of the stanzas, and ends the poem with a culmination of all of these sounds, which he imagines he “hears” in his heart. Isn’t it lovely to be a poet?
The Lake Isle of Innisfree
 
I will arise and go now, and go to Innisfree,
And a small cabin build there, of clay and wattles made:
Nine bean-rows will I have there, a hive for the honeybee,
And live alone in the bee-loud glade.
And I shall have some peace there, for peace comes dropping slow,
Dropping from the veils of the morning to where the cricket sings;
There midnight’s all a glimmer, and noon a purple glow,
And evening full of the linnet’s wings.
I will arise and go now, for always night and day
I hear lake water lapping with low sounds by the shore;
While I stand on the roadway, or on the pavements grey,
I hear it in the deep heart’s core.
—William Butler Yeats

Tactile Imagery

Tactile imagery describes how something, even something intangible, feels, either to touch or to experience with the whole body. Tactile imagery can also describe a spiritual experience. Using descriptive, tactile words like wet, cold, sweltering, and heavy, for instance, enables the reader to experience these things in your poems.
The rope I pull is stiff and cold,
My straining ears detect no sound
Except a sigh, as round and round
The wind rocks through the timbers old.
—Amy Lowell
 
This example from Walt Whitman also helps you to imagine how something feels through its descriptive language.
Or if you will, thrusting me beneath your clothing,
Where I may feel the throbs of your heart or rest upon your hip,
Carry me when you go forth over land or sea;
For thus merely touching you is enough, is best,
And thus touching you would I silently sleep and be carried eternally.

Olfactory Imagery

Olfactory images describe how something smells. It’s easy to disregard this sense, so try to work it into your poems if you can. Use your imagination! If want to attach a smell to something intangible, or something you haven’t smelled before, make it up! Here’s how poet Catherine Bowman used this sense in her work:
 
This year’s fragrance is a haunting scent,
embodying all the nuance of a war victim’s last breath,
the subtle zest of gunchamber grease, a cherry-red sheath,
the bourbon and sweat of a melancholy vet.
 
Edgar Lee Masters’ use of language conjures up the smell of death during war:
And there was the deadly water,
And the cruel heat,
And the sickening, putrid food;
And the smell of the trench just back of the
tents
Where the soldiers went to empty themselves;
 
Here’s another great example of olfactory imagery from Catherine Bowman:
… The drunks smell
like ripe watermelon …
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Roses Are Red
Try to use as many different senses as you can in your poetry. Making a conscious effort to use the senses will help the practice to become routine.

Taste Imagery

Taste is another often-overlooked sense you can try to work into your poems.
A woman bared her breasts and lifted her open mouth to
mine.
I kissed her.
The taste of her lips was like salt.
She left blood on my lips.
—Edgar Lee Masters
I am enamour’d of growing out-doors,
Of men that live among cattle or taste of the ocean or
woods
—Walt Whitman
 
And another by Elizabeth Barrett Browning shows yet another way to use the sense of taste …
 
What I do/And what I dream include thee, as the wine
Must taste of its own grapes.

Synesthesia

Synesthesia combines two senses together, as in “a velvety voice,” “sparkling silence,” or being able to taste a color, as in “the sharp taste of yellow on my tongue.”
Emily Dickinson wrote, “To the bugle every color is red.” Poets like to use synesthesia because it adds “umph” to an image—synesthesia is imagery intensified. Here are a few examples:
 
I am hearing the shape of the rain
Take the shape of the tent …
—James Dickey
 
Under hard yellow light, under glass ablaze
—David Wojahn
 
A hiss of gold
Blooming out of darkness
—Amy Lowell

Painting with Words: How to Create an Image

Beginning poets often have a difficult time with imagery because they think that their poems have to be complicated and mysterious; they feel that a poem easily understood is not a poem. Unfortunately, such a technique—however well-intentioned—tends to lead to some pretty bad poetry!
To create an image, begin with the central thing or idea itself. Say you want to describe an animal the way poet Elizabeth Bishop does in her poem, “The Fish.” Bishop describes the skin of the fish as hanging in strips “like ancient wallpaper.” What if Bishop wrote, “the skin of the fish was kind of peeling”? Sure, that’s visual, but it’s not as precise as “ancient wallpaper.”
Here’s a poem by Walt Whitman that uses concrete imagery, nouns, the things of the world. Try to imagine this poem without them:
[I will take an egg out of a robin’s nest]
I will take an egg out of a robin’s nest in the orchard,
I will take a branch of gooseberries from the old bush in
the garden, and go and preach to the world;
You shall see I will not meet a single heretic or scorner,
You shall see how I stump clergymen, and confound them,
You shall see me showing a scarlet tomato, and a white
pebble from the beach.
 
Concrete imagery is precise imagery. Instead of “vegetable,” Whitman writes “tomato”; instead of “egg,” he writes “egg out of a robin’s nest.” If he simply wrote egg, one reader might think of a chicken’s egg and another reader might think of an ostrich’s egg. Whitman knew that the only way to make his reader understand egg was to name it precisely.
Say this word to yourself: fruit. What did you imagine? Some of you probably imagined bananas, while others imagined plums. The word “fruit” is imprecise. However, we can see, touch, taste, smell, and hear (the peeling of) “banana.” That’s how you want to create your images. Think: bananas. Or plums.

Exercises

Here are a few exercises to get you thinking about imagery:
➤ Write a poem featuring an object. Try to make the reader see, feel, smell, taste, or hear this object. Use metaphor and simile. Make sure that your comparisons are also images. It’s better to compare one object to another, rather than compare your object to an abstraction. Use William Carlos Williams’s “The Red Wheelbarrow” earlier in this chapter as an example.
➤ Make a list of abstractions such as love, hunger, pain, death, grief, and so on, create an image for them, and try to make your images as original as possible. In other words, don’t have love = a red heart. Next, write a poem using as many of the images as you can. This is a flexible exercise; use only as many of the images as you need to make the poem work.
➤ Write a poem in which you focus on one of the five senses. Title the poem the name of the sense, i.e., “Touch,” and use as many concrete nouns as you can.
➤ Visit a museum (or a place where paintings are hanging, like your local bank) and write a detailed description of a painting or other piece of art. Next, try to connect that description to something happening in your life at the moment. For example, if the painting is of a boat on a rough sea, try to find something in your life to compare that to—remember to use images and concrete language.
➤ Write a poem about your own hands.
The Least You Need to Know
➤ An image uses the senses to help the reader see, feel, hear, smell, or taste something in the poem.
➤ Showing in a poem is often better than telling for helping the reader understand the poet’s intentions.
➤ Precision is the key to imagery; make your images as exact as possible.
➤ Synesthesia is the act of combining two of the senses together, and it gives an “umph” to an image.
➤ Concrete images are precise images. Think: bananas!
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