Chapter 5
IN THIS CHAPTER
Figuring out your competitors
Competing against incumbents
Talking yourself up
In Chapters 3 and 4, we show you how you can find out about and build relationships with your customers and then express what you’ve found out in the structure and content of your proposals. Lurking behind all this information are your competitors:
In this chapter, we discuss your competition — those who try to crash your proposal party with your customer. We talk about what to do if they’re the incumbent. We talk about what to do about them if you’re the incumbent. And we talk in either instance about ways to champion your cause over your competitors’ while remaining in line with your customer’s needs.
We go a little deeper in this chapter, getting to the “putting words on paper” stage perhaps a little early in the game, but the concept warrants the dive. In a proposal, your customers — your readers — are your most important consideration. But customers have little voices over their shoulders — from you and your competitors — that try to sway their opinions and perspectives. Considering, understanding, and even appreciating your competitors as you begin to write your proposal can have a considerable effect on your chances of winning.
In business, competition is a constant. Customers may tell you the same thing coaches do: A little healthy competition brings out the best in each player. And to a customer, competition can mean more innovation, better responsiveness, and richer savings.
Because customers love the benefits of competition, you have to prepare to outwit your competition even when you think the deal’s a cinch. And on that note, beware the salesperson who says, “We don’t have to worry about following that instruction or explaining that process — this is a done deal.” That’s a sure sign that someone hasn’t done the necessary homework. How do you make sure you do?
The following sections explore how you can stay ahead of your competition by asking the right questions. But answers to these questions — real, valuable answers — don’t come from mere reflection. You have to research your competitors by using an array of tools and techniques that proposal writers refer to as competitive intelligence. So we also look at these techniques here to help you assess what you know about your competitors and use this information to craft a carefully tailored proposal.
Early on, as you’re planning to write your proposal — in big companies, it’s part of opportunity planning; in smaller companies, it’s simply following up on leads — you must determine the level of competition you face to win the business. The type of competition you encounter changes everything about your proposal — the strategy, tone, structure, and content.
You have to find out whether a company currently owns the relationship with the account (making it the incumbent). If so, you have a lot more questions to answer:
If your answer is no, you need to ask another key question: Are you aware of any other competitors for this opportunity?
Here we’re talking about the usual suspects — the companies you compete with every day. You probably know a lot about their strengths and weaknesses from prior competitions.
Ask the first three questions you asked about an incumbent company here, replacing “incumbent” with “competitor”:
You also need to think about any internal sources of competition — that is, other projects or special needs within the customer’s organization that may conflict with your project. For instance, your potential customer can always
After you consider the internal and external threats to you winning the opportunity, you need to anticipate the unknown by asking: Might any unknown competitors come out of the woodwork at the last moment?
Going through these preliminary investigations can yield great benefits for your proposal. The answers to these questions can help you establish win themes, hone hot buttons, and may even alter your solution in positive ways (refer to Chapter 2 for more on win themes and hot buttons).
To beat any competitor, you not only have to physically perform better, but you also have to think better. You have to gather and analyze data to turn it into actionable strategies for your solution and clear themes and messages for your proposal. (The data you uncover about your competitors can help you express the difference between compliance and responsiveness that we stress in Chapter 4.) In short, an insight into your competitors can give you an edge when it comes to explaining the why behind the what of the customer’s requirements.
It’s not enough to know merely which competitors are planning to bid. You must also gain insight into what they can offer, at what price, and most importantly, what the customer thinks of them. You have three main ways to do this: through publicly available information, through your own colleagues, and from the customer itself.
Thanks to the Internet, search engines, and people’s (and companies’) illogical and insatiable desire to tell everything about themselves to total strangers, you can find out more than you ever thought possible about your competitors in some fairly easy and direct ways:
Your competitors’ website(s): These contain information about your competitors’ product lines and where they do business, not to mention claims of their strengths, their mission statement, and their value proposition. Go to these sites first to get a high-level view of their operations and offerings.
Drill down on menu headings such as About Us and Employment Opportunities. The former can shed light on your competitors’ history and their long-range goals. The latter can provide a subtle clue about their new strategies through the roles they’re trying to fill and in which location they hope to fill them.
Industry publications: Sources include technical articles in trade websites and magazines that have been written by your customers’ experts or profiles of your customers’ thought leaders. These publications can also explain industry trends (not yours; your customers’) that may help you pinpoint hot buttons and craft win themes and value propositions (refer to Chapters 2 and 9 for more on these).
Check out websites for trade shows and industry conferences for lists of presenters and topics related to your opportunity.
The best sources of competitive intelligence data may be right under your nose. Often you can find out most of what you want to know about your competitors by asking your colleagues. The challenge is figuring out who knows what, where those people can be found, and how to share that information with your writing team.
Don’t be afraid to talk about your competitors directly with your customers. Think back to what we said at the beginning of this chapter: Your customers love the benefits that come from competition. When customers share their likes and dislikes about another provider, they can influence your solution and offer to their advantage.
Many companies use the information they discover about their competitors to fuel a competitor review before every bid — a review that analyzes and assesses a competitor’s strategies and solutions for a particular opportunity. Sometimes the review is formal, sometimes not, usually depending on the size of your company and the value of the opportunity. The purpose of the competitor review is to anticipate the approach, solutions, and strategies that competitors are likely to use and determine ways to include this knowledge in your proposal.
Outputs from the competitor review can help you articulate the weaknesses in your competitors’ solutions and craft messages to neutralize their strengths, but this can take time. Ideally, you conduct competitor reviews several times during your sales cycle, even while you’re writing your proposal. Hold your first review before you decide to pursue the opportunity. Then, based on the complexity and significance of the opportunity, hold a second review as you begin crafting your proposal.
Your competitor review needs to answer the following questions (and, yes, some questions we ask under the section, “Assessing your competition: Asking the right questions” bear repeating during each review):
In larger companies, your opportunity or account manager may plan and schedule competitor reviews and select team members from both company and external sources. Your team should include individuals from all pertinent business areas, along with solution design, and even consultants, retirees, suppliers, and partners — whoever has recent experience with your likely competitors. In smaller companies, consider including customer service personnel along with sales and company leaders. But even if you’re the sole creator of proposals, you still need to answer these competitor review questions to help you craft effective key messages from your answers.
The competitive intelligence you uncover through research helps you know where your competitors excel and where they fall short, but getting that intelligence into your proposal in a meaningful way takes more than just knowledge. You need to analyze this information alongside your own capabilities and the needs of your customer.
In the following sections, we present two tools that can help you see how your capabilities stack up against those of your competitors — the SWOT analysis and the bidder comparison matrix.
A SWOT analysis is a common tool that proposal professionals use to measure you against your competitors. SWOT stands for strengths (yours), weaknesses (yours again), opportunities (their weaknesses), and threats (their strengths). (You could call this a “YSYWTSTW analysis,” but it wouldn’t be as much fun to say.)
Although almost any SWOT format will work just fine (check out all the varieties with an Internet search on SWOT), we suggest you build a simple, three-column and three-row grid in your word-processing software or a spreadsheet (see Table 5-1 for an example that shows our preferred SWOT format). Always label each SWOT for future reference: Include the competitor’s name, the customer’s name, and the date you developed the SWOT. Check out the appendix to find out how you can access a SWOT tool example online.
TABLE 5-1 A SWOT Analysis Template
Competitor________ |
Customer__________ |
Date_________ |
Strength |
Weakness | |
Yours |
What can we do to leverage our strengths against each item of importance to the customer? |
What can we do to mitigate our weaknesses against those items of importance? |
Theirs |
What can we do to counter threats (strengths exhibited by competitor)? |
What can we do to exploit opportunities (weaknesses exhibited by competitor) against those items of importance? |
You must completely answer the questions in the table if you want to write a proposal that can win business. Don’t worry about style here. Your SWOT can include descriptive phrases that cover key issues, quotes from customers or other sources that prove your assertions, or snippets of examples you heard about from key contacts or print/online sources.
If you leave any questions unanswered, flag them for more research. Pull your research findings and start filling out the SWOT analysis as quickly as you can before you start writing your proposal in earnest.
When you do start writing, your responses to the questions in your SWOT analysis help to clarify how your company plans for improving your position with the customer. They also help you to write win themes and proposal theme statements and the subtle doubt-seeding comments we call ghosting (see the later section, “Ghosting Your Competition”). You may also want to turn to Chapter 9 for more on crafting win themes.
When you’ve completed your SWOT analysis, you may want to take the intelligence you’ve compiled and complete a bidder comparison matrix. This “deeper dive” tool scores the strengths and weaknesses of all significant bidders against the what and why of the customer’s requirements.
TABLE 5-2 Bidder Comparison Matrix Template
Customer__________ |
Date_________ |
| ||
Requirements and Issues |
Customer Weighting |
Your Score |
Bidder B’s Score |
Bidder C’s Score |
On-time implementation |
20% |
9 |
8 |
4 |
1.8 |
1.6 |
0.8 | ||
Total cost of ownership |
25% |
7 |
8 |
10 |
1.75 |
2 |
2.5 | ||
Technical solution |
30% |
8 |
8 |
7 |
2.4 |
2.4 |
2.1 | ||
Co-marketing of innovations |
10% |
3 |
4 |
7 |
0.3 |
0.4 |
0.7 | ||
Provide “just-in-time” training at implementation |
15% |
10 |
9 |
6 |
1.5 |
1.35 |
0.9 | ||
Total Score |
7.75 |
7.75 |
7 |
Here’s how to fill out the bidder comparison matrix:
In the Requirements and Issues column, list all your customer’s issues, needs, hot buttons, and key requirements.
Issues may be those acknowledged or those unstated. As the opportunity matures, your inputs in this column will likely become more specific and, in the case of RFP responses, eventually reflect the evaluation criteria.
Enter weighting factors to indicate what you believe quantifies each requirement’s importance.
When responding to an RFP, use the weights from the customer’s evaluation criteria (RFPs often reveal how much each aspect of your bid “weighs”; for example, Training = 15 percent, Price = 20 percent, Technical solution = 60 percent, and so on).
If you’re in a proactive situation, or if your customer doesn’t provide weightings, create your own percentages based on your interpretation of the customer’s needs.
Based on your SWOT analysis entries, assign points for your company on a 10-point scale (1 is low, and 10 is high), indicating your strength on each requirement.
Enter the points in the upper box for each requirement.
The total weighted score reflects the relative standing of your team versus that of your competitors. These scores show which bidder is strongest and highlights the relative strengths and weaknesses of them all — including you.
You can take this new perspective on your competitors and infuse it into your proposal-writing process. In effect, these scores can help guide you or your writers when crafting win themes and ghosting statements.
From intelligence obtained by the salesperson, you know that quality of product is very important to the customer. Based on web research, Company B and Company C will fall short.
Guidance: Write about our reputation for quality and provide relevant proof points to highlight our strengths in this area (for example, JD Powers’ award-winning product line, Angie’s List recommended, and so on).
Company C falls short in several requirements. It needs multiple vendor partners to bring its capabilities to the same level as ours, which will raise its price.
Guidance: Write about our full set of capabilities, providing proof points for each requirement. Discuss our ability to deliver all requirements at a lower cost. Perhaps ghost Company C by saying “to merely meet our abilities, other providers have to hire subcontractors or partner with multiple companies, which raises their costs and introduces unnecessary risks of managing multiple partners. We have the expertise and staff to do the entire project with no outside help.”
When contracts come up for renewal, incumbents (the current providers of the product or service) usually hold many competitive advantages over all challengers. For instance, they thoroughly know the customer (who’s who and who matters), the work (especially problem areas), and how much everything costs to support and maintain. However, incumbents often suffer from many self-imposed disadvantages that make them vulnerable.
To unseat an incumbent, you must determine how to provide better service or product at a lower or comparable price. (With price, watch out for transition and implementation costs. The incumbent doesn’t incur these; only challengers do.) You also have to provide evidence of prior success, preferably in a similar industry on a project of equal scope. If your organization can’t identify how to do this, you’d be better off walking away from the opportunity.
Follow these steps to unseat incumbents who hold contracts that are up for renewal:
Compile intelligence on the customer and incumbent.
Do this long before the contract expiration date. Look for signs that the incumbent is being arrogant, taking the customer’s business for granted, not listening, slipping into routine performance levels, tolerating rising costs, or generally being unmotivated or unprepared to defend the contract.
Get inside the customer’s and the incumbent’s organizations to identify and gauge the incumbent’s advantages and vulnerabilities. Ask the following questions:
Where do you find sources for this insider information? Seek out customer insiders like its leaders, staff, SMEs, and former employees. Consider incumbent insiders such as former staffers willing to talk, employees of subcontractors, and consultants who follow the industry. Just be sure to filter the intelligence you collect. Often opinions won’t align, and some sources may be feeding you false intelligence for a variety of reasons.
Assess the incumbent’s performance and develop improved solutions.
Populate a spreadsheet with your findings beneath these column headings:
Qualify the opportunity and decide on your course of action (find out more about this in Chapter 6).
Use your assessment spreadsheet to answer the following key questions:
Use a variety of tactics to capitalize on the incumbent’s weaknesses and neutralize its strengths.
Consider the following approaches:
Develop better solutions. Tactfully test them on the customer, increasing its dissatisfaction with the incumbent.
Be careful how you reveal your ideas; the customer may share them with the incumbent.
Determine the price-to-win.
One of an incumbent’s most frequent vulnerabilities is cost creep: Wages increase, and new personnel may be added over time. Familiarity can breed indifference and inefficiency. Work hard to understand the customer’s budget and cost expectations; study the incumbent’s resourcing and apparent pricing; and develop a bottom-up cost estimate by taking a fresh, objective look at resource requirements.
Be vigilant, and be prepared for surprises.
You may find a door open to unseat an incumbent, at least initially. When an incumbent sees you as a threat, expect a fierce battle. Be on the lookout for disinformation spread by the incumbent and other tactics to neutralize your own strengths.
Prepare a persuasive proposal that matches or exceeds the incumbent on all evaluation criteria by neutralizing its strengths and capitalizing on its weaknesses.
Beat the incumbent question-by-question, issue-by-issue by addressing the customer’s dissatisfactions, issues, and hot buttons with understanding and validated improved solutions. And don’t forget to include the proof of your prior successes.
In proposal writing, the process of subtly and positively undermining the efforts of a rival is known as ghosting the competition. Ghosting is not trash talk, nor is it confrontational. As the name implies, the best ghosting statements are subtle, like squeaking doors in the middle of the night; they conjure up a little sense of unease.
Thanks to your SWOT analysis, you have all the intel you need to take your analysis one step further and assess the trade-offs inherent in the ways that you offer to solve the customer’s problems. To hone in on the elements that make good ghosting statements, you need to follow these steps:
Review your organization’s (and your solution’s) strengths in the top-left quadrant of your SWOT grid (refer to Table 5-1 to get started).
Start a new list, prioritizing your strengths in relation to the customer’s requirements and preferences. Along with highlighting your good points, consider the strengths you can use to counter your competitor’s ghosting of your weaknesses.
Compile your competitors’ weaknesses from the bottom-right quadrant of your SWOTs.
Note the plural. It’s time to consolidate your competitors into one big adversary in your proposal story (which also helps maintain anonymity for your ghosting). While different competitors have different areas of strength and weakness, look for common shortcomings that they all share versus your strengths (for example, no competitor can match your ability to deliver in-person, just-in-time training for the customer’s IT staff). List them next to your corresponding strength. Now you have the basis for comparison/contrast ghost statements.
Compile your competitors’ strengths from the bottom-left quadrant of your SWOTs.
Consider whether they echo your strengths or counterbalance their weaknesses. Cross out any elements in your strengths list that are no longer clear advantages. Do the same for your competitors’ strengths (for example, you and your competitors’ technologies are essentially the same; whatever solution you create will be similar). Circle any competitor’s strengths that you can’t clearly diminish with your strengths, their weaknesses, or your customer’s particular needs in this instance.
Compare your weaknesses from the top-right quadrant of your SWOT analysis against your competitors’ strengths.
Where can they attack you? How can you ward off their ghosts? Look for ways to make a particular weakness irrelevant for this specific opportunity (for example, you score lower on total cost of ownership, but the customer has an immediate cash flow problem: You can implement the solution faster at lower initial cost).
When you’ve finished your trade-off analysis, you’ve accumulated all the raw material you need for writing ghosting statements.
The following sections explore different ways that you can ghost your competition to highlight your strengths, point out competitor weaknesses, and minimize your organization’s weaknesses.
Time to conjure up some ghosts. Start with the positives — your strengths in relation to your customer’s needs and your competitors’ relative weaknesses. There’s no end to ways to highlight your strengths at the expense of your rivals, but here are a few techniques to consider:
Identify your competitors’ weaknesses in areas where your organization is strong, and write statements that substantiate those strengths. This way, you can set yourself up as the gold standard for a feature, benefit, or capability with only the faintest reference to your competitors.
For example, “We house maintenance and repair teams within 15 miles of both of your production centers to ensure that we respond to your calls more quickly than anyone else could hope to.”
Use your trade-off analysis not only as a preparation step but also as a form of persuasion in itself. Consider this technique for justifying your solution while subtly positioning your rationale as superior to that of your competitors.
For example, “We thoroughly investigated two other approaches to your need for uninterrupted access. The first, duplicating your entire system to ensure that you stay connected, was far too costly. The second, creating a series of soft switches, brought too much complexity to the solution and created potential failure points. So we opted for …”
Differentiate any shared strengths by pointing to associated discriminators. For the strengths that you share with your competitors (common technology, for instance), consider ghosting statements that begin with clauses that indicate that the strength is common in the industry, and then point to a related but separate advantage you hold over the competitor.
For example: “Most high-end providers have adopted X technology, so the track record of support you’ll receive after implementation is crucial to your success.”
Now for the negative side of ghosting — the subtle put-down of your rivals. Everyone has weaknesses, and if you’ve done your homework, you can put your competitors’ weaknesses on display, if ever-so subtly. Here are a couple of ways to cast doubt without disrupting the positive tone of your proposal:
Use a comparison/contrast statement. You remember this from high school English (hey, school did give you something you can actually use later in life!). Set up your competitors’ weaknesses with a conditional clause and deliver a solid, positive statement about your strength.
For example, “While some solutions require local power and backup systems, ours powers itself with centralized backup should you lose power.”
Allow the analysts to help out. Regardless of your industry or market, someone is watching over what you and your competitors do and how you do it. Highlight your opponents’ weaknesses by quoting the most reputable of these watchdogs. If you have the best ratings for your services, say so and cite the source. If your main competitor has a lesser rating, bring it to your reader’s attention.
For example, “You told us how much being responsive to customers means to your business; a poor reputation with the BBB is like losing someone’s trust — it takes a lot of positives to win it back.”
If you or your solution has a perceived weakness, you need to anticipate that your competitors can attack you just as you can attack them if the roles are reversed. Here are some scenarios and potential comebacks you can use:
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