Chapter 14

Using Words to Persuade: The Art of Rhetoric

In This Chapter

arrow Discovering the nature of rhetoric

arrow Using rhetoric to wow when giving a presentation

arrow Boosting a failing argument with rhetorical tricks

arrow Analysing a series of rhetorical statements

Rhetoric is the study of how to persuade with words. It's an ancient topic, as ancient as anything academics talk about. Perhaps the dominant theme of this book, in line with most Critical Thinking advice one way or another, is how to impose structure on ideas, turn claims and counter-claims into arguments, while allowing other kinds of thinking only a supporting role to the central role that logic plays.

But real life isn't like that. Most of the things you hear people say, or even read, aren't arguments in any sense: they're more like descriptions, exclamations or instructions. When people try to persuade you, the chances are that they don't come up with much by way of a rational argument, but instead try to appeal to your hopes, fears and emotions. They may even tell a few jokes.

You can call these tactics rhetorical flourishes if you like, but they're all an important part of persuading people. Therefore, they deserve to be part of any book on arguments and certainly part of any examination of Critical Thinking.

In this chapter I look at some of the ways you can use rhetoric to persuade — whether your efforts are already going well or not, and in informal and more formal situations (such as work presentations). I even include a section on how jokes can get your audience thinking.

remember Although logic tries to force people to agree with you, to convince an audience in any meaningful way you will usually do much better by trying to win them over. Invariably, the person who triumphs in the debate comes across as co-operative rather than confrontational — and that's something that Critical Thinkers can certainly take onboard.

Introducing Rhetoric: When an Argument Isn't an Argument

Arguments, in the sense I use it in most of this book, are a series of statements for or against something, all set within a logical framework that makes them persuasive. But throw away that framework now, and what you have left is rhetoric.

tip Rhetoric is still a series of statements designed to persuade — but with the logic taken out. And it works — no doubt about that. This section identifies some of the elements rhetoric uses in place of remorseless logic.

Choosing the overall approach

When the Ancient Greeks first studied rhetoric, they identified three basic distinct approaches — three different ways to win an argument:

  • Logos: Facts and figures make the speaker look knowledgeable and impress the audience. Critical Thinkers do this automatically, of course. Join the facts up using logical arguments and you convince people who are following carefully and are open minded.

    remember In other words — logos doesn't win most people over! So the good speaker adds in some of the other two approaches too.

  • Pathos: Reaction in the listeners or readers. Politicians of course dwell on sad tales people have asked them to help with. But even the most clinical social scientists or academics can't resist dressing up their essays with a little tirade (angry speech) at a social injustice, or stop themselves dwelling a little longer and in a little more detail than necessary for the point they're making on examples of misfortunes or tragedies. All this is pathos.

    tip But beware you don't overdo it and end up with bathos, which is an abrupt transition in style, for example, from a lofty scholarly account to a highly subjective personal view, producing a ludicrous effect.

  • Ethos: Involves convincing your audience that you're trustworthy and expert. You speak (or write) with quiet authority. Achieving this goal is of course the tricky bit — the skill is linked to having charisma, a certain magical, even ‘godlike’, quality. One practical tip is to be honest, accurate and modest.

Making a great speech

A Spanish-born lawyer, called Quintillian, set out what he saw as the key elements of rhetoric in the first century CE. Although Marcus Fabius Quintilianus (to give him his impressive full name) focused on public speaking, his points also apply to all sorts of attempts to put forward a particular point of view.

Here are his five ingredients for a great speech:

  • Invention: The key stage of thinking of something to say! Invention is concerned with the ‘how’ and the ‘what’ of the issue. It covers questions such as how to come up with a strategy to argue a point, a task that's often equivalent to thinking of some good reasons to support a conclusion.
  • Arrangement: How you're going to set the speech out, in the sense of how to order and arrange the ideas and any arguments being included. Should you say a bit about yourself first? Or keep the conclusion secret to the end?
  • Style: Involves decisions such as would it be effective to pause here, and maybe insert a joke? And how about a little personal anecdote in the middle? Politicians often like to end their speeches with an appeal to action, wrapped in an emotional glow: ‘Yes, we can!’
  • Memory: This is something where I fall down: I can never remember my points. Fortunately (unlike in Quintillian's day) keeping a sheaf of notes handy is usually acceptable. But these are little use if you haven't got the important points you need written down clearly on them. There's nothing worse than having to flounder through your notes with a crowd of people waiting on your next word! So make sure your notes have a clear structure that makes them easy to dip into if necessary.
  • Delivery: The original Greek word for this is hypokrisis, which roughly translates as ‘acting’. Acting skills are what make all the difference between a good presentation and a lousy one. You have to empathise, ‘to bond’ with your audience, create a sense of personal dialogue with everyone present. Plus, of course, your speaking needs to come across ‘loud and clear’ and also sound melodious and varied, a combination that's rather harder to achieve.

trythis Write a two minute speech — a simple ‘presentation’ — and (via the wonders perhaps of modern cameras or phones, record yourself giving it. Short of a topic? Why not just make it your own short version of the ‘Art of Rhetoric’?

Clever old Quintillian's five elements of rhetoric are so good that people continue to use them today. The first one, invention, is the part that overlaps most with the usual ideas of Critical Thinking. But in rhetoric, you don't just draw upon arguments. You may want to offer authorities to back your view — maybe even to present yourself as such — or perhaps overwhelm with facts and figures (see the approaches of ethos and logos, respectively, in the preceding section).

remember A vital part of speaking and writing effectively is to tailor what you're doing to the particular audience, a skill I cover in more detail in Chapter 10. For example, don't deliver a complicated, fact-heavy account to people who just need an overview, or give a weepy, emotional account to a sceptical audience. And don't tell dirty jokes to a Select Committee at the House of Commons looking at teaching thinking skills!

Winning When You're Right

Rhetoric provides some great strategies for making your points more persuasive, say, as part of a spoken presentation or debate. These tactics work whether you're right or wrong, but I assume you want actually to be right and so I concentrate on that for the moment.

To discover some shadier approaches to bolster a weak argument though, check out the later section ‘Debating Successfully When You're Wrong’.

Favouring a simple but effective structure

The simplest way to structure your speech is the same way that you structure an essay, in order to aid comprehension:

  1. Outline the points you're going to make with a short introduction.
  2. Give the meat of the argument, following the outlined structure.
  3. Summarise the argument.

tip As the lawyers’ dictum has it:

Tell them what you're going to tell them. Then tell them. And then tell them what you told them.

When you identify in advance your points, you let the audience know what to expect and encourage them to mentally prepare for what's coming up. Explaining in advance helps the audience to file information and ideas away, and to see connections better. Summing everything up at the end, reprising the key points you've made, isn't going to bore anyone. Instead it reassures those who got the point the first time and gives a second chance to those who didn't.

remember Speeches in particular, and arguments in general, are much more persuasive when they're clear — which requires a structure. A structure is most useful when it is explicit and audience can see it. (For Dummies books do this all the time, with their hierarchy of headings and the mini-intros at key points telling the reader what's coming up.)

Repetition is a bit of a no-no in academic books and articles, but in speeches, and journalism, it's a key tool. In such contexts, don't be embarrassed to repeat points. Novice speakers are often shy of doing so, feeling that the audience may spot and frown upon it (‘borrring!’), but great speakers love to repeat things. Think of some of Winston Churchill's epic speeches, such as: ‘We shall fight on the beaches, we shall fight on the landing grounds, we shall fight in the fields and in the streets, we shall fight in the hills; we shall never surrender’!

tip Repetition is valuable in creating a pattern, reinforcing the structure of a presentation and providing a powerful aid to comprehension.

Remembering the difference between denotation and connotation

In real life conversations and exchanges, words rarely mean one thing. And often the thing that the speaker intends to communicate is hidden behind another, more diplomatic, form of language. It is useful to both be able to tell what the deeper meaning of words is, and to be able to communicate extra levels of meaning in your own words.

jargonbuster Many words can denote roughly the same thing, but have very different connotations:

  • Denotation: Using something as a sign for something else. For example, the jargon buster icon denotes that the text near it explains the use of an obscure or specialised term. In other words, when you mean what you say, literally, or, at the very least, figuratively (that is, metaphorically).

    For example, if you say that a new pop song literally blew your head off, you better stop talking and seek medical advice.

  • Connotation: When you mean something else that may be initially hidden. The connotative meaning of a word may be based on implication, or shared emotional association with a word.

    Take the world ‘greasy’, for example: a completely innocent, lovely word. Many things, such as the moving parts of engines, should be greasy. But if you describe a meal in a restaurant, or worse still, your boss, as greasy, it contains negative associations. That's connotation.

Here's another example of language being used to make a point subtly. The words say one thing on the surface, and quite another in practice. A message that might be impolitic to give bluntly is being sneaked in by sleight-of-hand.

A lecturer is asked to write a reference for a student who has applied to be an administrator in a large organisation. The lecturer writes that the student is ‘a very original thinker who often comes up with unusual ideas’. It sounds like a nice thing to say — the denotation is positive — but given the context the connotation is negative, and indeed may set off alarm bells! Not a team player! Possible fruit cake!

Conducting your argument with jokes

tip Jokes are a great way to ‘break the ice’ and get an audience on your side.

But what if you're speaking or writing? A sheaf of favourite Snoopy cartoons won't do. Ideally, if you're a natural wit, you can ad-lib and make the joke relevant. But otherwise try to have a few prepared jokes up your sleeve!

Here's a joke that I think illustrates an otherwise abstract idea about how humour often involves an unexpected shift in perspective.

A man, who lives in a flat in a hot town centre, goes on holiday, leaving his neighbour to water his prize Bonsai Tree and look after his dog. A few days later the neighbour sends him an email to say his beloved Bonsai Tree has died.

The news spoils the man's holiday and he writes back rather crossly to say that at the very least his neighbour might have led up to it more gradually, for example by saying in a preliminary email that the tree was looking a bit thirsty and he was worried about it. The neighbour apologies. The next day he emails to say that his dog seems rather thirsty.

Get it? As well as being pleasurable, humour is a valuable way of getting people to think: it seems to ‘loosen up’ the thought processes.

warning In many contexts, jokes are going to be considered not very respectable. Even when funny, they can be seen as inappropriate, bad form and frowned upon. So by all means include a joke in your presentations and public speaking, But show a little, ah, discretion.

Speaking in triples

tip This method for achieving rhetorical effect is simple: whenever possible speak in triples. Trios, triplets and triads abound in Western culture. Just consider the memorable triads in the nearby sidebar ‘Famous triples’.

What is it about triples that makes them so effective? Three creates a pattern, and offers a structure. Each triple is also a beginning, a middle and an end. And even where there's no grand sense to the triple, it sounds right. Go for it! Just do it!

Some of the most famous speeches ever delivered feature triples prominently. Julius Caesar proclaimed: Veni, vidi, vici (I came, I saw, I conquered). Abraham Lincoln's Gettysburg Address played on the power of three by saying: ‘We here highly resolve that these dead shall not have died in vain, that this nation, under God, shall have a new birth of freedom, and that government of the people, by the people, for the people, shall not perish from the earth’.

In more recent years, that natural orator Barack Obama (a self-proclaimed fan of Lincoln), played on the power of three as he campaigned with: ‘Yes we can’. His Inaugural Speech included memorable lines such as: ‘We must pick ourselves up, dust ourselves off and remake America’, and unmemorable ones too, such as: ‘Homes have been lost; jobs shed; businesses shuttered’. That's style for you!

Debating Successfully When You're Wrong

In this section, I look at a few slightly dodgy tactics that, of course, you'd never stoop to, but which you may find useful to know about anyway, because other people certainly use them! These great debating tricks can make even a weak hand into a winning presentation.

Making a virtue of not knowing

remember Audiences are much more sympathetic to people who admit not knowing than they are to someone who reveals through a mistake that they're ignorant. After all, most of the audience doesn't know either and no one likes a smart alec. So if you don't know, shout it out loud! This is a legitimate tactic in arguments.

But a more sophisticated kind of ‘admission of ignorance’ is a little bit less honest. Funnily enough, when it suits them, subject experts often back up their positions by saying that no one knows certain things about an issue. The tactic has a grand Latin name: the argumentum ad ignorantiam.

For example, physicists, astronomers and cosmologists regularly announce firmly that no one knows (and no one can know) anything about the state of the universe before the Big Bang — the primordial explosion that most scientists think brought the universe into existence. But when facts are based on a claim about ignorance — for instance, that the age of the universe is that which can be calculated from the Big Bang onwards (because no one can know anything about the universe before) — strictly speaking, such claims are fallacious.

tip Don't let the grand rhetorical flourishes that often accompany this tactic blind you to errors in reasoning.

Employing convoluted jargon

The rhetorical strategy here is to use big, complicated words so that you seem to be an expert. Academics and specialists of all kinds invariably think that the more obscure their terms, the more expert they are. This style also looks rather impressive. Indeed, people have written books using the method — even in the area of Critical Thinking where in principle the method should be shunned.

tip The good news is that this strategy isn't so difficult. Anyone capable of regurgitating a dictionary or thesaurus can learn the technique. And it never hurts to quote some phrases from long-dead foreign languages, too. Check out the nearby sidebar ‘You says what now?’ for an example.

Throwing in a koan

A koan (pronounced Co-ann or perhaps Cohen even) is a paradoxical statement designed to force people to ‘think outside the box’. The original koans were used to train Zen Buddhist monks so that they no longer depended on conventional reasoning to understand the world, but instead understood it through sudden, intuitive enlightenment.

A famous example is to ask someone to imagine the sound of two hands clapping and then to ask them to imagine the sound of one hand clapping. Another example from literature and philosophy is Jean Paul Sartre's description of a waiter. Sartre explains grandly that the waiter is a being who is not what he is and is what he is not, a contradictory claim which is, in its own way, a koan.

warning This method of asking people to think about things that literally don't make sense is characteristic not only of many academic philosophers, but also of many other people in public life (I'm thinking of those political types again). These people advance a position, qualify it and then finally suggest a contrary position that negates the original assumptions. They then tell the audience their answer is present somewhere in this contradictory mix of assumptions, if only the audience were clever enough to follow them.

Conducting your arguments via questions

‘What for?’ you may say, immediately using the strategy. ‘Why not?’ I would reply, doing likewise, and maybe add ‘Doesn't everyone?’ and ‘How many of the great thinkers can you name who didn't do that?’

tip The built-in advantage for the questioner is that asking a question is almost always easier than answering it. (But beware the ‘yes/no’ variety, which can leave the questioner looking long-winded.)

Take a complicated and long-running debate like that about evolution, for example. The issues are things like whether or not human beings really are the random product of billions of years of random mutations or whether some kind of supernatural element needs to be imagined (such as God). Someone sceptical of scientific explanations can easily ask: ‘If you think the theory of evolution explains the world, then can you at least give the basic outline to explain how people evolved from hydrogen atoms?’ The questioner barely needs to know the first thing about what he's asking. Great!

What's more, even if the speaker brilliantly deals with that question, the sceptic can simply nod appreciatively and bide his time for another complicated query. The speaker does the work and the questioner gets the credit. (Smart students know this trick, of course.) Or the person can turn the question into a list of things to be explained, just to be on the safe side.

tip Complex questions (to use the technical term) where a series of things that ought to be kept separate are strung together can be useful too, but the more complicated they get the more they run the risk of annoying the listeners.

In the evolutionary debate example, a complex question might be: ‘How did birds develop wings, and in what ways is it similar, or different to, the mechanism that explains how birds evolved from dinosaurs?’ The fact that the issues joined together in the question may be logically quite different isn't the questioner's problem: he or she can smile sweetly and leave the expert to sort out the mess.

Above all, never underestimate the power of the ‘loaded’ question, such as the celebrated ‘When did you stop beating your wife?’ By implying that the questioner is simply unable to imagine a universe in which the other person isn't beating his wife, the question has a more profound influence than the answer. Politicians who struggle to be logical or reasonable, often excel at this kind of question, offering them as sound bites to the media: ‘Is the government going to stand up for our fishing industry — or carry on kow-towing to European Union bureaucrats?’

warning Watch out though: the arguing-through-questions technique is a bit of a boomerang, just as likely to generate confusion as to shed light. After all, people can all too easily confuse themselves even without people firing questions at them.

tip If you're making a presentation or giving a talk and some annoying person in the audience comes up with a killer fact that seems to put you in the wrong, don't be too keen to find some obscure counterexample or suchlike to save face. Think instead about revising your position. At least any Critical Thinkers in the audience will respect your openness.

Getting personal: Ad hominem

Ad hominem argument tactics are criticisms directed at the person making the argument, rather than at the argument itself. The method was very popular in the ancient world, where it was considered perfectly reasonable, indeed quite scholarly. It was particularly favoured for philosophical debates! But today ad hominem attacks are usually seen as the resort of scoundrels and count as fallacies.

In fact, nasty though such tactics sound, they're sometimes sensible and useful. Lawyers can legitimately use them to undermine evidence. For example, the evidence of an expert medical witness may be undermined if the lawyer can show, say, that the expert has previously made many misdiagnoses in his career. Alternatively, a scientist who claims to have made a dramatic new discovery may usefully be challenged over her record if she made similar grand claims in the past and was found to have been mistaken.

Another little piece of Latin jargon exists that means roughly the same thing: tu quoque. The form of the argument, familiar from everyday disagreements, is as follows:

  • You tell me not to leave my dirty cups around the house!
  • You leave dirty cups around all the time!
  • (Therefore, your view is dismissed.)

remember The argument carries legal weight too. At the Nuremberg Trials, held at the end of the Second World War, German officers accused of violating the laws of war by using American uniforms to infiltrate Allied lines successfully used the tu quoque argument to defend themselves. They introduced evidence that the Allies themselves had on at least one occasion worn German uniforms.

In 2012, Prince Harry was embarrassed after he was photographed at a ‘private party’ wearing a German uniform Alas, despite having had one of the most expensive private educations money can buy, he didn't seem to know to use the tu quoque argument — and respond ‘but the best British heroes have worn Nazi uniforms too!’ — to defend himself.

Discerning a Message

This section contains an exercise in Critical Reading that also illustrates the point in this chapter about the different rhetorical techniques used to win an argument.

You can find out more about Critical Reading in Chapter 9, but the key point here is not to settle for just the ‘top level’ read, which is more or less a paraphrase of what the author or text states anyway, but to go the crucial step further and work out ‘what's going on’ under the surface.

Let me give an example to explain what I mean by that. Imagine someone in charge of a nuclear power plant. That person's job isn't just to read the dials (for example, showing temperature, pressure and so on), but to understand the context and what the dials display. Maybe the reactor is in danger of overheating and exploding? Only this deeper understanding gives guidance as to what should be done next.

trythis Estimates suggest that 80 per cent of people who smoke started before they were 20 years old, and half of this number before they were 16. With these ‘young smokers’ primarily in mind, tobacco companies were first obliged to print health warnings on cigarette packets in 1971. The first warnings simply ran:

  • WARNING by H.M. Government, SMOKING CAN DAMAGE YOUR HEALTH.

Notice the weasel word ‘can’. Twenty years later, the warning was ‘strengthened’ to say:

  • TOBACCO SERIOUSLY DAMAGES HEALTH

Not just upping the stakes to ‘seriously’, but also removing he element of doubt. In 2003, new EU regulations stipulated that the warnings cover at least 30 per cent of the surface of the pack and that a variety of more specific warnings should be used, such as:

  • SMOKING KILLS
  • SMOKING CLOGS THE ARTERIES AND CAUSES HEART ATTACKS AND STROKES
  • SMOKING CAUSES FATAL LUNG CANCER
  • SMOKING WHEN PREGNANT HARMS YOUR BABY
  • SMOKE CONTAINS BENZENE, NITROSAMINES, FORMALDEHYDE AND HYDROGEN CYANIDE

Right, that's the background. So what, with your Critical Thinking hat on, do you think is the message now being delivered to the public by the governments?

Answers to Chapter 14’s Exercise

Here are my thoughts on the smoking warnings exercise.

Literally and ‘logically’, of course, the message is that smoking is very dangerous and maybe should be avoided. That's the message if logos (facts and figures) decides the target readership's reactions. But some psychologists, such as the contemporary Swiss-American Clotaire Rapaille, say that the message being delivered, particularly to the young people (including children), who were the governments’ main targets for their campaign, was that smoking was part of a forbidden, adult, risky world. In short, the message that smoking's desirable and cool! Paradoxically, the more dire the warnings, the more many young people felt that smoking was something subversive and hence desirable. It's that difference between denotation and connotation again. You maybe won't disagree with smoking being dangerous, but most of us know that the effect of being told something is strictly forbidden is to make doing it seem more attractive!

Perhaps realising this, or maybe just because the figures for youth smoking showed the warnings were less effective than anticipated, in 2003 the EU decided to add not more arguments but ghastly pictures of supposedly smoking-related diseases to packets. This approach was a shift away from the use of logos and logic to the use of pathos and its appeals to fear and the emotions.

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