Modern newspaper design with its strength below the fold allows for a great variety of headline shape, especially in broadsheets. Pages these days consist of one-deck, one-thought headlines, as opposed to the multi-deck style once favoured, although sometimes a second deck is introduced. A deck of headline can consist of a number of lines of type depending on its width, or measure, and upon its shape and position in the page.
Shape
Single-column headlines are usually of two, three or four lines, although sometimes they can have as many as five or six if they have dominant end-column positions, or contain some particularly wordy phrase which the page planner wants to put across (see example on page 136).
Double-column or three-column headlines are usually of two or three lines and of a bigger type size than single-column heads since they are found on the more important stories on the page. The page lead has a headline that crosses most of the page – a banner or streamer – running into perhaps a shorter second line alongside a picture or another story (see examples in Chapter 2).
In addition to these conventional shapes there are long single-line headlines crossing the page, often down-page, and extending perhaps from three to as many as six columns in maybe 36pt or 42pt type. These cover stories carried in a number of legs, such as under a picture. See also examples in Chapter 2.
The more important stories both in tabloid and broadsheet layouts, particularly the page lead, might occasionally introduce a second headline thought for emphasis or for design purposes by means of a strapline or overline, as in:
Sects break truce in border flare-up
TEN DIE IN JORDAN AMBUSH
A strapline can justify a main heading which might seem bare on its own, or make possible one that might not otherwise stand at all. The second deck is also used on some papers for this purpose as in:
RAIL FIRMS FACE
SAFETY PURGE
Action follows
Southall smash
This method permits a bold main heading to hold the top of the page while giving needed explanation below it in smaller type.
A one-thought headline consisting of an opinion might have a tag-line to justify as in:
EXPORT BOOM
A TRIBUTE TO
‘NEW LOOK’
INDUSTRIES
Chancellor tells City
Although it would have been better here to include ‘Chancellor’ in the main headline thought.
Most headlines, however, concentrate on one point in one deck. In single-column ones of this sort the character count in the bigger type sizes might be as little as 6½ characters to the line, although where an 18pt or 24pt headline is used, usually down-page, the count is easier. With wider headlines across two or more columns the count is not necessarily any easier since the typesize called for is bigger. A seven-column streamer in large type can offer the most difficult count of all. Its one advantage is that the words do not need to break into a number of even lines to satisfy a narrow single-column measure.
A headline that offers a really generous character count is the freestyle one which is often built around a statement or a quotation which aptly sums up a story. Such headlines are made a focal point in page design, often in conjunction with a picture, and cannot be arbitrarily imposed on a page without breaching its type balance. Here is a headline that accompanied an atmospheric picture:
Weapons at the ready,
faces daubed, No 2
Platoon move off into
the dawn light
The aim of this sort of headline is to give an impressionistic treatment to a news story. It succeeds by being different from other headlines. It signals that here is a special sort of approach.
To have visual balance and what newspaper designer Alan Hutt used to call ‘eye comfort’, a page of news items cannot be a hotch-potch of headline shapes altered at will to suit a subeditor’s whims. Fitting the headline thought to a nominated shape and type is a discipline that has to be learned. It also focuses your thoughts wonderfully on the facts.
Arrangement
Within the various shapes a headline is arranged in two main ways. Either it is centred on the space available, or it is set left, sometimes indented by half a pica (a nut). Readability is usually the deciding factor, although type style can come into it where a paper opts for predominantly centred or set left headlines. A centred headline with a wide difference in width of lines has the eye jumping about to find the starting point of each line and is therefore hard to read. A successful centred headline should have fairly full lines with not too much variation in width, with the top line full to lend it strength (as below).
A set left headline is supposed to drop the eye to each successive line more easily. Yet it must still have a have a full top line to look visually right, and if the lines are too uneven the raggedness on the right leaves noticeable white on the page. This can give the outside edge a weak look if used in the right-hand end column. It is banned from this position in some papers.
A set right headline (or caption for that matter) is seldom used for the reason that the raggedness on the left makes it hard for the eye to pick up each line. Look at these examples:
POLICE HOLD LOOTERS IN SWOOP ON CITY SHOPS |
POLICE HOLD LOOTERS IN SWOOP ON CITY SHOPS |
POLICE HOLD LOOTERS IN SWOOP ON CITY SHOPS |
The only other arrangement is the stepped headline, still favoured by some US papers:
METAL FATIGUE
IS LIKELY CAUSE
OF JUMBO CRASH
The first line should be set full left, the last full right, and the middle line placed evenly between. The lines need to be the same width to look right. It is a style now little used.
Type style
In a well planned newspaper the types conform to a regular stock range, with a variant introduced to give emphasis to a particular story or to form a display focal point, perhaps in conjunction with pictures, as we said in Chapter 2. Newspapers are careful to stick to their main stock types. If the seriffed Bodoni or Century is used for the news pages, perhaps a sans serif Gothic or Helvetica face will be the variant, with a greater but still controlled type variety allowed on the features pages. If Gothic or Helvetica is the stock news face, then Century Light or the heavily seriffed Rockwell or Pabst (see pages reproduced in Chapters 1 and 2) might be the variant.
Within most headline types, including the bit-mapped computerized clones now mainly used, there are bold, light and italic versions and condensed and expanded ones. There is thus ample variety in size and shape within a range without need to mix the ranges other than to introduce a chosen variant.
What is helpful to the headline writer is the modern tendency for newspapers to use only the lower case of a range in different sizes and weights. This might be accompanied by the occasional use of capitals in a variant type (Helvetica and Century light are popular for this) for logos or special headlines, of sometimes second decks. We have already referred to the theory that lower case headlines with their flowing outline and more varied contour are easier to read at sight, as with ordinary reading text. Along with the trend towards lower case is a decline in the use of italic type, both lower case and capitals, for the same reason – readability.
Using lower case certainly eases the letter count and is helping to free headlines from dependence on short stereotyped headline words of the sort sometimes used in tabloid papers with their narrow columns and large caps type. The other side of the coin is that bigger character counts can result in wordy headlines that lack punch and eye appeal. And no advocacy of lower case headlines can dispute the fact that the success of tabloid papers was built on the eye-catching poster effect of big sans caps headlines.
Character counts
The office type book, of which all production journalists should be given a copy along with the office stylebook, will provide you with character counts for the different standard measures. The examples should show each size in capital and lower case letters, with roman and italic, expanded and condensed versions where applicable, along with numbers, fractions, punctuation, stars, blobs and other type ‘furniture’ in each range. It will be seen that letters within a type size vary in width not only in their lower case form but in capitals, too. The count for a headline has to take account of these variations and also of the letter space needed between the words.
A headline count is easier in capitals. Apart from the I which counts as a half character, or the M and W which count as two, the variation in width among the remainder in virtually all types is slight enough to be self-cancelling between one letter and another. Allowing the space between words as equal to one character, it is easy enough in most types to get an accurate count. Even so, a rash of Is or Ws can lead to imbalance however carefully the characters are counted.
In lower case letters there is more variety of width, with f, i, j, l, r and t being narrower and averaging out at about half a character each, while w and m count usually as one and a half. Punctuation can vary from a half character to a full character, as between a comma and a question mark. Dashes and ellipses can take two or more character spaces.
Most systems are formatted for single character space between words, although this can be reduced to accommodate a much-wanted headline or otherwise save space. The readability of reduced word space depends on whether the letters separated by the space have upright or receding strokes, the latter giving the impression of greater white, as with the letter c or with capitals A, V and W.
Working out a headline count goes like this:
ISRAEL IGNORES
½111111½111111 = 13
UN ARMS WARNING
111112112111½11 = 16½
The second line here is too long for a headline which allows for a maximum count of 14, so ‘UN’ is deleted, leaving the headline as:
ISRAEL IGNORES
½111111½111111 = 13
ARMS WARNING
112112111½11 = 13½
This gives two almost equal lines with a little white each side when centred on the space.
But watch out when numerals are used. They are narrower than letters. The odd one or two will make little difference as in:
TEACHER
CHOOSES
PRISON
INSTEAD
OF ‘UNFAIR’
£10 FINE
But in the following headline the last line will be a good deal shorter
SHOPLIFTER
TOLD: PAY
BACK FIRM’ S
£50,000
Type, as we have seen, can be reduced or enlarged to any size within its top and bottom limits in a computerized system. Yet systems are formatted to give type in standard size sequence (see Chapter 2). This helps in visualizing and in giving pages calculable type balance and eye appeal. When writing a headline you can press a ‘headline count’ key to show on screen whether it fits or if it is too strong and by how many characters. It is allowed on most papers to vary a chosen size up or down by up to 5 per cent to accommodate a wanted headline.
Having a typebook around is important in visualizing, especially for a new subeditor. It gives the ‘feel’ of type and helps in understanding projection and page design. An editorial production staff with a feeling for type and an awareness of its possibilities is an important requirement for a good-looking paper. A paper’s type character is threatened if subs are blindly writing headlines they cannot visualize or connect with the pages. It is a pity some offices use headline sizes and shapes coded by numbers or letters. Though quick and convenient, such cyphers discourage the young journalist keen to know about page design.
The type book is your introduction to the world of typography. The usages and nuances of effect of different types and variations of letter shape can convey to you a feeling for the psychology of type, an awareness that there are fast and slow types, and male and female, that some types are suited to particular purposes. If you lean towards page design and have a flair for visualizing you will learn how to give weight and boldness to a news page, authority to a leader page, and busyness to the sports section. You will discover how a condensed type used sparingly can enliven a standard format layout, and how a newspaper’s visual character is maintained by cunning and consistency in type use.
Spacing
Tight character counts pose problems not only with the words in headlines but with the visual balance of the lines. White space used sparingly and creatively in a page can help the eye, but white space in a headline that was intended to be occupied by type is a waste. It does nothing for the page and, if occurring frequently, can make it look empty.
Try to get the letters, as far as possible, to fill the space allotted. If white is wanted for visual reasons the lines can be indented (i.e. set narrower than the space to be filled) or a deliberate display can be projected with planned white space as part of the pattern. Some glossy magazines are very good at this.
In headlines the use of white space is to give adequate separation between words and lines so that the message is easy to read and the visual effect satisfying. For instance a headline should not finish up looking like this:
GIRL
TEN, SAVES
CAT IN STORM
DRAIN
Nor should it become pyramid-shaped:
SPIN TWINS
SHATTER SURREY
HOPES AT THE OVAL
Or be a staircase:
SUN BREAKS
ALL RECORDS
FOR SEPTEMBER
If you find it hard to get a good shape, change the words and start again. The bigger the type the greater the damage caused by bad balance. An 84pt banner that falls short by half a column at each end weakens the top of the page and loses authority. Likewise, long single line headlines below the fold need to be full if they are to dominate as they are intended to.
Vertical or line spacing is automatic with most systems but it helps with headlines if space can be varied visually in lower case lines where ascenders and descenders clash one on to the other. Lower case type is difficult to line-space tidily. Spacing lines of capitals is matter of consistency, but beware the intrusion of the cross-line descender on the capital Q.
Spacing through the lines of a headline at page make-up to fill out a shortfall of text in the story will result in poor visual balance and should be avoided except when time is short It is better to extend the text.
Spacing – other than the above strictures – is a matter of visual style. There can be no universal rules for headline or columnar spacing. Some magazines make a feature of tightly spaced lines, which can be easily achieved in computer setting and can look good in gravure and in advertising display. Others go for all-round air or massive front indents. Some newspapers, as a matter of style, indent all columns by a nut each side to give more vertical separation of matter, or indent the front of the lines only. Others print the text with type that has a bigger body – 7pt on 8, or 8pt on 10 – thus marginally increasing the separation between the lines and avoiding clash of ascenders and descenders.
The golden rule is to be consistent You will achieve a cleaner page if headline spacing is not tight here and wide there. Maximum readability demands that one line should be clearly differentiated from another and one word from another, otherwise the eye should not be aware of the white space.
The creative moment
There are two methods of thinking your way into writing a headline. One is to read the copy and try to come up with the wording before subbing the story. This is necessary if the headline is to be the keystone of the layout. The method has the advantage that the headline is written at the stage when the type and even the layout can, if need be, be adapted to accommodate it.
The other method is to sub the story, absorb the material and then work out the headline. The disadvantage here is that by now you are closer to the page deadline and time might be short.
Some stories produce a headline easily so that in reading the copy it jumps into your head; others are difficult to transmute into a few words. In human interest or ‘mood’ stories the hard facts can be few. The effect is in the telling or the description, as with royal visits or elaborate ceremonials.
Whatever the story, if a headline has not immediately occurred to you it is a good idea, as you sub the copy on screen, to jot down likely words on a pad. As many as half a dozen key words might emerge. You then shuffle them and arrange them in the right order to give balance and sense, as in a puzzle.
Take an imaginary situation. A teenager called Janice Thompson has gone missing from home. Her friends tell the school head that the girl has quarrelled with her mother over drugs and glue sniffing. A reporter on the local paper, which has already been told by the police that the girl is missing, hears about this and goes to see the mother. She is anxious to talk. She wants her daughter back. She says Janice, who is fifteen, walked out after being told by her that she was no longer welcome in the house if she continued to smoke pot and sniff glue. The reporter files the story and it is given a strong top-of-the-column space on page five.
The copy is late. The subeditor checks it, tightens it up a little, casts it off quickly and writes down the words: mother, teenager, drug, quarrel, vanish and home. The first effort is:
TEENAGER
VANISHES
AFTER ROW
AT HOME
OVER POT
This is no use for the fact that the girl has gone missing is not new. Also the word after splits the headline thought into two.
MOTHER’S BAN
ON POT DRIVES
TEENAGER FROM HOME
is better. Nearly there, in fact. How does it look as five lines of single column?
MOTHER’S
BAN ON POT
DRIVES
TEENAGER
FROM HOME
Still a bit slow. Also the second and last lines are one character too long for the type size and the size must not be reduced. Using the name would connect the story better with the readers. Try again
MISSING
JANICE:
MY DRUGS
BAN TO
BLAME
SAYS
MOTHER
Better, but too many lines, and the headline thought has again been split. Try not to use the colon. Thought: why not mum instead of mother?
MY DRUGS
BAN DROVE
JANICE
FROM HOME
SAYS MUM
fits the five lines and is just right. Fill out the middle line by making it JANICE, 15, and we’ re there.
In another story a foreman at the local car factory is sacked after an altercation in which he hits an apprentice and knocks him down. The apprentice had accused him of being a ‘scab’ (a non-striker) during a strike.
The words on the pad are: union, sack, foreman, angry, scab, factory. First of all, the ‘scab’ jibe is not new or contested. The new issue is what has happened to the foreman. The sub’s first effort at a two-line double column lower case headline is:
Foreman loses job
in ‘scab’ jibe row
‘Scab jibe row’ is not liked. Also the headline needs more pace. A neat shuffle produces the answer:
‘Scab’ jibe costs
foreman his job
There are advantages in subbing a story before writing the headline. The sub knows thoroughly what the copy is about so that whatever headline emerges has to square with it. A headline written first could be based on a misconception acquired at a superficial reading. There is a subconscious tendency, too, where a good headline has cropped up first, to bend the story towards the headline. This is how distortion begins.
Alternative words
‘If there is one outstanding fault in present-day headlines it is that very sameness with which they speak day in and day out. Much of this monotony in inevitable because of the cramping space limitations that compel repeated use of words, phrases and constructions that have been found most serviceable.’
Garst and Bernstein, Headlines and Deadlines
It will be seen from the examples quoted in this chapter that the limitations on word length and the search for type balance lead the headline writer to use a short word where alternatives are available. Fortunately this offers few problems. There is almost always a shorter word. The danger arises where certain ‘serviceable’ short words are allowed to become clichés: words to fall back on as familiar get-outs especially in those cases where the facts of a story do not entirely justify their use.
It is a favourite occupation of critics of newspaper headlines to tot up how many times in a day’s issue of the national tabloid papers verbs such as axe, snub, lash, probe, slash, hit, quiz and quit can be found.
Using the same truncated words can lead to tired don’ t-read-me headlines, which is a pity with a language as flexible as English. As a young sub, you will find the best way out of this trap is to devise your own list of short alternative words for use in headlines. A good thesaurus of English words, a modern usage dictionary such as the Penguin English Dictionary and a stout exercise book are all that you need for this assignment.
Here to ease the way are some suggested alternative words, but remember in using synonyms that there can be nuances of meanings between one and another, and that a situation or statement could be misrepresented if an alternative word were used without proper thought. Also, as the list shows, some words have two or more meanings, each with its synonyms.
A
abandon
desert
drop
give up
leave
neglect
pull out
quit
abbreviate
cut
lop
reduce
shorten
abolish
close
drop
end
finish
rid
squash
abscond
flee
leave
run
accelerate
hasten
hustle
press
push
quicken
rush
speed
accumulate
amass
build up
gather
hoard
store
acquire
buy
collect
gain
get
grab
take care
adjust
alter
change
revise
shift
administer
boss
control
direct
give
manage
rule
run
aggravate
annoy
inflame
irritate
provoke
worsen
agreement
accord
bargain
bond
deal
pact
treaty
alleviate
ease
lessen
let up
lighten
reduce
relieve
soften
allocation
lot
part
portion
quota
ration
share
amalgamate
combine
fuse
join
link
merge
mix
team up
unit
amalgamation
joining
link
merger
tie-up
announce
disclose
notify
proclaim
report
reveal
state
tell
appeal
ask
call
plead
appoint
choose
invest
name
pick
appointment
job
mission
place
post
apportion
allot
distribute
divide
share
split
appreciate
enjoy
grow
increase
like
rise
appropriate
grab
loot
nick
seize
snatch
approve
agree
allow
OK
pass
permit
arbitrator
go-between
judge
mediator
referee
umpire
argument
dispute
quarrel
row
rumpus
set-to
ascertain
check
confirm
discern
ensure
find out
inquire
learn
seek
assistance
aid
back-up
help
relief
attain
achieve
get
reach
secure
authorize
allow
approve
back
favour
let
permit
sanction
sponsor
B
beginning
birth dawn
debut
onset
opening
start
bequeath
allot
give
leave
provide
will
bewilderment
daze
puzzle
shock
surprise
business
company
firm
C
calculate
assess
estimate
rate
tot up
value
challenge
contest
dare
defy
dispute
change
alter
amend
revise
reword
shift
circumvent
balk
foil
outwit
skirt
close
call off
end
finish
shut
commence
begin
embark
open
start
take off
communicate
call
pass on
reveal
tell
write
competition
contest
fight
game
rivalry
complain
bitch
groan
grouse
grumble
moan
nag
object
protest
resent
confront
challenge
face
halt
present
congratulate
comment
praise
consider
examine
inspect
look at
mull
probe
report on
study
construct
assemble
build
erect
form
make
put up
raise
continue
extend
go on
persist
plod on
contradict
deny
dispute
dissent
gainsay
oppose
refute
reject
control
curb
limit
organize
Peg
run
cooperate
help
join with
share
create
build
design
form
invent
make
criticize
assess
censure
challenge
chide
decry
evaluate
rap
rebuke
review
slam
D
damage
harm
hit
hurt
spoil
sully
deflate
contract
pinch
shrink
squeeze
demonstration
demo
march
show
sitdown
sit-in
deprecate
belittle
damn
discount
discredit
knock
run down
description
account
picture
sketch
story
tale
designate
appoint
fix
name
select
destroy
break
end
ruin
shatter
smash
disagreement
clash
conflict
dispute
quarrel
rift
row
rumpus
wrangle
discriminatory
biased
partial
distribute
circulate
give out
issue
supply
division
break-up
parting
split
donation
gift
grant
hand-out
present
E
employment
career
job
post
task
work
endorsement
acclaim
approval
backing
sanction
support
essential
key
main
necessary
vital
exaggerate
blow up
boost
distort
magnify
overstate
examination
analysis
inquiry
probe
scrutiny
study
test
exonerate
absolve
acquit
clear
expedite
hasten
hurry
push
quicken
rush
speed
explanation
account
alibi
answer
excuse
F
fabrication
falsehood
invention
lie
story
tale
untruth
facilitate
advance
ease
expedite
smooth
forbid
ban
bar
block
deny
disallow
prevent
reject
stop
foundation
base
basis
charity
grounds
origin
roots
trust
fundamental
basic
primary
vital
G
govern
command
control
direct
manage
rule
run
grievance
grouse
grudge
injury
wrong
guarantee
(noun)
bond
pledge
promise
support
surety
warranty
(verb)
endorse
ensure
pledge
warrant
guillotine
axe
chop
cut off
gag
silence
H
hallucination
delusion
dream
freak-out
illusion
mirage
vision
hazardous
dangerous
dodgy
perilous
risky
unsafe
I
illegitimate
banned
illegal
illicit
lawless
unlawful
illustrate
explain
picture
show
imminent
at hand
near
soon
important
big
great
high
key
notable
prime
top
vital
improve
better
enhance
heighten
polish
restore
improvement
advance
betterment
progress
recovery
inaugurate
begin
install
launch
open
set off
start
independent
free
impartial
neutral
unbiased
influence
colour
induce
lead
push
sway
inquire
ask
beg
look into
question
see
instigate
cause
incite
provoke
set off
spur
start
interfere
hinder
interrupt
meddle
pry
thwart
interrogate
ask
examine
grill
pump
question
quiz
vet
introduce
explain
float
launch
promote
start
investigate
analyse
check
deliver
examine
inquire
probe
pry
sift
study
invite
ask
beg
bid
call
J
jeopardize
endanger
hazard
imperil
risk
judgement
decision
finding
result
ruling
verdict
justify
back
bear out
confirm
defined
endorse
excuse
explain
support
K
kidnap
abduct
capture
carry off
grasp
seize
snatch
steal
take care
L
leader
boss
chief
head
master
ruler
guv’ nor
legalize
allow
ordain
permit
ratify
luxurious
costly
lush
plush
posh
rich
M
maintain
assert
hold
keep
insist
support
management
board
company
directors
executive
firm
owners
manoeuvres
dodges
exercises
plots
ruses
tricks
wiles
manufacture
build
construct
make
produce
mediate
decide
intervene
judge
moderate
allay
control
lessen
limit
modification
alteration
amendment
change
switch
N
negotiate
bargain
confer
discuss
haggle
parley
talk
neighbourhood
area
district
environs
locality
place
section
zone
nominate
appoint
call
choose
decree
invest
name
present
propose
put up
raise
O
objective
aim
ambition
end
target
observe
check
eye
inspect
look at
note
see
spy
watch
operate
act
control
run
work
oppose
bar
block
challenge
combat
contest
counter
fight
obstruct
rebuff
reject
repel
organize
control
develop
fix
form
plan
run
set up
P
pacify
allay
calm
cool
ease
heal
quieten
settle
permanent
abiding
constant
durable
enduring
lasting
postpone
delay
hold up
putt off
prohibit
ban
bar
disallow
end
forbid
half
prevent
rule out
stop
veto
prohibition
axe
ban
embargo
end
halt
veto
proposition
idea
notion
offer
plan
purpose
aim
ambition
end
idea
plan
reason
pursue
chase
dog
follow
harry
hound
hunt
search
seek
trace
track
trail
pursuit
chase
hunt
quest
search
Q
question
challenge
doubt
point
probe
query
R
recommend
back
boost
comment
praise
present
support
urge
reduce
axe
chop
cut
lower
slash
regulate
control
govern
legalize
order
run
vet
relinquish
abandon
drop
forgo
give up
leave
quit
resign
repudiate
deny
disclaim
spurn
requisition
acquire
get
grab
seize
take
resign
abandon
give up
lay down
leave
quit
responsibility
duty
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