Chapter 12
IN THIS CHAPTER
Writing an impressive LinkedIn About section
Showing, not telling, your strengths
Formatting an eye-catching About section
Adding Multimedia
The About section of your LinkedIn profile is where you introduce yourself to your target audience and tell your professional story in a conversational manner. The About section is your digital introduction and first impression.
When attempting to write the About section, many LinkedIn members are immediately rendered paralyzed. Others find themselves wandering into their kitchen or garage, intent to reorganize. Any task, regardless of how odious, is suddenly more attractive than facing a blank About section with the goal of writing about yourself.
In this chapter, I show you how to easily write an impressive, goal-oriented About section that attracts and satisfies your target audience. I discuss why it’s important to write your About section in the first person, and I show you how to format your About section so that people find it easy to read and attractive. I also give you the tips you need to conquer the About section so that you can get this monumental task off your back.
It’s best to draft and edit your About section in a word-processing program rather than directly in the About text field. My team and I have written thousands of LinkedIn profiles, and more than a few times computers have crashed, Internet connections were lost, LinkedIn went offline, and summaries written in the text field disappear in a blip. It is horrible when it happens, and no amount of cursing or crying brings unsaved work back to life. I know this through direct experience.
The most popular word-processing program in the known universe is Microsoft Word. If you don’t have access to Microsoft Word, don’t panic. If you are a Mac user, you can use Pages for Mac. Google Docs works great regardless of operating system. Open Office is a free word-processing program that you can download and install. Do try to make sure that whatever program you select, it comes with spelling and grammar check.
After you write your About section in a word processor, copy it and paste it into the About section of your profile. Here’s how to add your finished About section into your LinkedIn profile:
Now that you know how to add your About section to LinkedIn, let’s look at how to draft your best possible About section to catch readers’ eyes and compel them to reach out to you.
You’ve probably seen LinkedIn summaries that start like this: “John Gates is a respected executive with an impressive track record of accomplishments … .” You know it’s his profile. Either he wrote it himself or he copied and pasted it from a bio. Reading it, it feels strange and oddly off-putting. The reason you may react this way is because the profile was written in a third-person narrative voice. In a third-person narration, a narrator tells a story about someone else. Pronouns such as “he,” “she,” “it,” or “they” are used to refer to the characters.
Because the LinkedIn profile clearly belongs to the person writing it, third person is inauthentic and disingenuous. As I mention in Chapter 1, LinkedIn is a social network, and its goal is for members to interact and forge strong relationships with their networks. By writing in third person, you create distance between you and your reader. Instead, be sociable and draw your reader in by writing in the first-person narrative form (“I”). Don’t be afraid to use “I.” Claim your story and tell it proudly in your voice.
There are always exceptions to the rule. If you are using LinkedIn for prospecting and sales, you might decide to write in second person narrative. Second person narrative is when you refer to the reader directly using the word “you.” For example, “Do you want to improve your productivity and save money?” Speaking directly to your reader is engaging and gets prospects involved. On the other hand, I’ve worked with executives who have accomplished some almost super-human tasks. When a person has a lifetime of extraordinary accomplishments, sometimes third person is truly the best option. If you aren’t quite sure where you fit, go with first person: It’s authentic, engaging, and fits most people’s goals on LinkedIn.
It’s hard to write about yourself. That’s why so many profiles on LinkedIn are simply copied and pasted from old resumes. The problem then becomes the original resume. Few people actually work with a professional resume writer to create a succinct and clear history of their professional accomplishments. Instead, the majority of resumes use generic, general descriptions that don’t spotlight accomplishments or tell an engaging professional history. Here’s an example:
Results-driven and goal orientated professional commanding over 10 years of progressive leadership success. Top-performing, dynamic manager delivering track record of consistent achievements. Recognized strengths include excellent interpersonal skills, strong client relationship building, and leadership in the effective implementation and use of technology. Exemplary commitment to company and personal success, exhibiting strong leadership, problem-solving, communication, and technical skills.
Reading that paragraph, do you have an idea what that person does on a day-to-day basis? Do you understand who this person is and what he or she loves to do? Do you have an idea of what industry this person works in, what type of job he or she has, or even what he or she is capable of accomplishing? Do you want to reach out to learn more? No!
That paragraph is a lot of gobbledygook words strung together simply taking up space. To create a powerful, compelling About section, stay away from resume speak. Write instead in a natural, conversational manner.
Even if your resume was professionally written, you still don’t want to copy and paste it into the About section. Resumes are for job search. If your goal isn’t job search, already your profile is portraying you in an inaccurate manner.
If you goal is job search, copying and pasting your resume still doesn’t work. Let’s say a hiring manager discovers your profile on LinkedIn after performing a search for the company’s ideal candidate. The hiring manager is impressed and reaches out to you to request your resume. What happens when that resume is a one-to-one copy of your profile? That hiring manager is going to be disappointed.
Here’s another scenario. Suppose you submitted your resume for a job listing, and the hiring manager decides to check you out on LinkedIn. Once again, the hiring manager wants to learn more about you, but he is getting the same information he already has in his possession. What a letdown! Here’s your chance to make an impression and seal the deal, but instead, by recycling content, an opportunity may be lost.
By creating a unique and high-level LinkedIn profile that extends your brand and delivers targeted content, each interaction with your target audience builds interest and confidence and propels the reader through to a successful conclusion.
Before you begin writing your About section, it’s important to remember why you are on LinkedIn and who is your target audience. As I discuss in Chapter 1, a powerful LinkedIn profile is written toward your goal and target audience. It’s not what you want to say, but rather what your target audience needs to know. Your LinkedIn About section should connect to your audience and align with your objectives.
If you haven’t already, write down your LinkedIn goal(s) on a piece of paper:
Next up, who is your target audience? Try to be as explicit as possible. Who are these people, what do they do, what are they looking to achieve, where are they located? For example:
Keep this list in front of you as you begin to write your About section. Look at it and write to your goal and write to your target audience. Ask yourself, “What does my target audience need to know about me?” “What do I offer that will get my audience to take notice and feel good about me?” Use that sheet of paper to jot down ideas.
A strong LinkedIn About section needs to catch a reader’s attention immediately. LinkedIn collapses your About section; therefore, it’s important to use those first 40 or so words in an eye-catching way so your reader will want to click “See more” to expand the section.
There’s a number of ways to catch a person’s attention. You can use your favorite quote:
Greatness is first and foremost a matter of conscious choice and discipline.
— JIM COLLINS, GREAT BY CHOICE
Quotes are great because if they are well chosen, your reader will immediately get a better sense for who you are, and they may find a commonality with you if they too find that quote inspiring. You can also elaborate on why this quote has meaning to you and why it drives you. So few people dig deep, and by doing something so different, you’ll instantly stand out.
You can also hook your reader by mentioning an enormous accomplishment, or a lofty goal you accomplished or intend to accomplish … and it doesn’t even necessarily need to be professional.
Brad Finkeldei, a career coach writes: “Why is there a rubber chicken in my profile picture? A mentor of mine was killed in a terrorist attack and I am paying his message forward by giving out 10,000 tiny rubber chickens to inspire and empower people to step into their fears, stop being chicken, and do what they love.”
If you are on LinkedIn for prospecting and sales, you could start with a statement that shows you truly understand your prospects’ pain points and the gains they want to achieve. This is a great way to catch their attention and make them want to learn more.
If all of these starting points leave you feeling empty, there’s one other way to catch your reader’s attention, and that is by stating your elevator pitch. An elevator pitch introduces yourself to your reader and summarizes in a sentence or two what you do and how it affects your reader. The reason it is called an “elevator pitch” comes from the idea that you are in an elevator with a VIP and you have just the amount of time it takes to ride an elevator a few floors to succinctly and compellingly explain a product, service, person, group/organization/company, or project to gain this person’s interest and buy-in.
Let’s say you have just met a person and she asks, “What do you do for a living?”
You could answer, “I am a Realtor.”
Or, you might provide an elevator pitch that would draw the other person in and may even get her interested in you: “As a Realtor in the Greater Philadelphia area, I partner with families, helping them get their house ready to attract buyers so that they can sell at the best possible price. I work hard to understand their needs so I can quickly and easily find them their dream home.”
An easy way to get started crafting your elevator pitch is to imagine you are explaining what you do for a living to a small child. Simplify what you do down to the core concepts. Do not use words such as contextualize, organic, synergize, or paradigm. And stay away from silly corporate jargon. Instead, concentrate on the results you offer and how what you do helps people and businesses.
Here’s an outline to use to create your elevator pitch:
I help individuals/businesses/_________________ create/discover/implement
___________________ so they can achieve _____________________.
By including an elevator pitch in your LinkedIn About section, your readers will understand who you are and what’s in it for them, compelling them to continue reading the rest of your profile.
Once you have your eye-catching introduction and elevator pitch, it’s time to tell your professional story. Your reader now has a general idea of who you are and what you do. Next you need to fill in the rest of the pieces. Think of the About section as your professional manifesto. Here are some questions to think about to help you create your manifesto:
As you brainstorm ideas for your About section, think of author and speaker Simon Sinek’s quote:
People don’t buy what you do; they buy why you do it … . Very few people or companies can clearly articulate WHY they do WHAT they do. By WHY I mean your purpose, cause or belief — WHY does your company exist? WHY do you get out of bed every morning? And WHY should anyone care?
You could create an About section that simply states what you do and how you do it. You could also simply list your strengths, one right under another. The issue with that is it’s not compelling or interesting, nor does it portray you as someone who should command respect and notice. By diving deep and truly turning your About section into a professional manifesto, you are shaping your image into one that is high level, interesting, and attractive.
Your About section should explain your benefits. What strengths do you have? How do they help your reader? What does your reader want to know about you? What are they seeking? The answers to these questions determine what you should write.
Here are some benefit sentence starters:
If you are looking for a specific job, find a job description for your desired position. Incorporate those skills and qualities the job demands into your About section. You can find job descriptions on the hiring page of a company’s website or on a job listing site. By targeting your profile toward that job description, you show that hiring manager or recruiter that you are the perfect person for the job.
If your goal is sales and prospecting, your target audience is scanning your profile, thinking, “Can this person help me?” Tell your readers how they will benefit from working with you. Include a success story of a past client and what they were able to achieve by working with you. Make your value clear to your readers so that they feel confident in you and the solution you provide.
When your goal is reputation management, you may decide to talk about activities outside of your career’s day-to-day functions. You might mention your involvement in your community and your commitment to continuing your education. Your profile is your digital persona. Include the best parts of who you are and showcase them on your profile.
Although your job experiences contain career successes and achievements, your About section is the place to mention one to three career highlights. A career highlight isn’t a simple success, but rather an amazing accomplishment.
By including a few career highlights, you are providing quantifiable evidence of your abilities. You want your reader to come away with a feeling of confidence that you are who you say you are. But whatever you do, don’t provide too many career highlights. It’s important to leave some successes in your back pocket so there are things to discuss when a person reaches out to you directly. And, it is important not to get too detailed with the highlight — keep the description at a high level.
When you add a career highlight, ask yourself the question, “So what?” It’s important the highlight answers that question. It’s not enough that you set up a new department. You want to showcase the true impact: You set up a new department with 50 employees that immediately became profitable and brought the company an additional $25M in revenue.
I often see LinkedIn profiles that only describe products, services, or a business. It’s a good idea to provide additional information for context, but remember, your profile is your own! People are reading it because they want to learn more about you. People do business with people. Your About section helps people see you as a real person. If your readers wanted to learn about your company, they would click to the company’s LinkedIn company page or website.
For some people, it’s scary to open up and talk about themselves. Realize that with your LinkedIn profile, you provide only the information you are comfortable providing. You never have to state anything that makes you uncomfortable. However, it is important to open up somewhat. Decide what you are comfortable sharing. Figure out what you want people to know about you. Once you know how you want to be perceived, create an About section that showcases that persona.
A successful profile converts. That means the person reading the profile is compelled to do something other than click to another person’s profile. If you are a job seeker, this conversion might occur with the reader calling you to request your resume to talk about a potential job opportunity. If you are in sales, the person reading your profile may visit your website to learn more about the products or services you offer. If you are a reputation seeker, the reader could follow you on LinkedIn to read your future long-form blog posts.
To compel your readers to do something after looking at your profile, you must provide them with a clear call to action. If you don’t tell your readers what to do, often they just surf away.
What do you want your reader to do?
You have a number of options:
Unless you have grave privacy concerns, I suggest including a telephone number or email address. The VIPs of this world are direct people, and when they want to contact you, they want to do it immediately. If they can’t find your phone number, they may move on to the next person in their LinkedIn search results. You are on LinkedIn to network and find business opportunities. By trying to avoid the occasional telemarketer, you may also avoid real opportunity.
Once you have your contact method chosen, it’s time to conclude your About section. Here’s one example:
[email protected]
.Or:
Another way to craft this call to action is by tempting your audience with a carrot. Give your readers a reason to get in touch with you. Will you provide them with a free phone consultation? Do you have experience that you are open to sharing?
Here are some examples:
Call me today for a free phone consultation to see if your business can benefit from my services. Let’s put the proper solutions into action and together we’ll turn your goals into reality.
Or:
Perhaps you really don’t want your reader to take any action. Some people are on LinkedIn to simply shape how people perceive them, and it’s not important for the reader to reach out. In this situation, gently end your About section in a positive way, leaving your reader feeling inspired and impressed.
Here are a few examples:
My success is my clients’ success. I gain enormous satisfaction helping my clients optimize their marketing efforts. Building successful campaigns and generating positive word of mouth is what keeps me striving forward in my career.
Or:
The bottom line is I help my clients save money and plan for a secure future.
Or:
My focus moving forward is to continue to improve processes and affect positive change within this amazing organization.
Formatting? There’s no formatting allowed within a LinkedIn profile! That’s true, but it’s also not true. There are a number of things you can do to make sure your About section is easy to read and attractive to the eye.
For example, space between paragraphs means white space, which makes content look less dense and easier to read. To create an extra line of space between paragraphs in your About section, press the Enter or Return key on your keyboard twice after the end of every paragraph.
You can also use symbols to spice up your text. (I show you how to copy and paste symbols in Chapter 7.) Symbols can be used to create horizontal lines to divide your content. Stars, circles, or check marks can be used as bullets to show off your accomplishments. Check out Figure 12-2 to see how I used symbols to create what appears to be an underline and bullets to draw attention to my call to action.
You can also make text appear bold, italicized, or underlined by taking advantage of a tricky work-around: Unicode characters. Check out my LinkedIn Text Formatter at www.linkedin-makeover.com/linkedin-text-formatter
, which is a tool that enables you to enter text and have it automatically convert to bold, italics, script font, and more. Once you see the different formats, copy the format you like and paste it into your LinkedIn profile (see Figure 12-3).
Here are examples of compelling and engaging About section that you can use to help you create your own. Don’t worry if you can’t find an About narrative that matches your role completely. Read through all the examples with an open mind. You should be able to pull sentences and paragraphs from the different examples into an About section that authentically reflects you!
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.In the next chapter, I show you how to round out your profile with additional sections like Honors and Awards, Organizations, and more. I’ll meet you there!
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