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If you had some interaction with the agent or editor
at a conference, or heard her speak, or read something
good on her blog, you can mention that. Briefl y.
Legs just long enough to reach the ground:
[TITLE] is a 95,000-word legal thriller. I’ve been a
practicing lawyer for four teen years. This is my fi rst
novel. I heard you speak at the Greater Downey
Writers Conference and think this project will be
a good fi t for you.
The above is simple and gets the job done, which is
to spur the reader to the sample chapters. If, however,
your genre is somewhat creative (e.g., Amish-vampire),
you should help the reader by placing it in context. If
you can identify another successful novel, you can say
that yours is “in the style of
.” If you’re
off the beaten track, you can sometimes come up with
a combination of genres. This novel is like ’Salem’s Lot as if
written by Beverly Lewis.
Don’t gild this lily, though, by intimating you are on
that level or even better. Let the reader conclude that for
herself as she reads your chapters.
What about publishing credits and training? Don’t
include nonfi ction articles or poetry or anything else that
doesn’t show you know how to write a novel. Short stories
in prestigious journals are good. Previous novels (if not
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