suggests knowledge, rigour and an agreeable openness about
what makes their product so special.Talking about ‘the secrets of
our success’ in the plural is also a slightly quirky thing to say that
might snag people’s attention. What if I made each ‘secret’ a
spread in the final booklet? Then I could scour the raw material
for substantiating facts for each secret and tell a story based
around those. I start compiling a list of so-called secrets directly
out of my interview transcripts, and after giving them a bit of
TLC I end up with:
Secret No. 1 – Quality first. And middle. And last.
Secret No. 2 – Accept no limitation.
Secret No. 3 – Whatever you do, do it with passion.
Secret No. 4 – It’s all about the experience.
Secret No. 5 – There’s no big secret.
I especially like the last given that I’ve just been banging on
about secrets.That’s a good start – now I have a structure for the
piece. Next I comb my raw material for substantiating facts,
phrases and ideas, grouping these under each secret. Soon I’m
ready to compile my notes and convert them into sentence form:
Secret No. 1 – Quality first. And middle. And last.
Our aim is simple: to create the best coffee in the world.This obsession
with excellence at any price means [name] is unashamedly for the few.
We create our coffee for a very particular audience with a very par-
ticular lifestyle – international, cultured, successful and above all,
sophisticated – the sort of person you’d be delighted to have sitting next
to you at dinner. Frankly, not everyone will get it (in any sense). Are
we taking this ‘coffee beyond compare’ thing too far? We think not.
[Name] is confident but never arrogant, cultured but never conceited,
exclusive but never elitist. Just like you, really.
The tone of voice comes straight from the CEO and reflects the
qualities of the product – defiantly upmarket but with an under-
stated intelligence and sense of humour. It seems to work so I
push on:
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