114 Resonate
Now Dave has big problems. His hops
haven’t arrived, and there’s no telling
how long they’ll be held up in customs.
He needs to launch his new brew at the
competition because he’s depending on
the press coverage to make it a top seller
this year. And he’s shut down a big part
of his operation in anticipation of the
event, so he’ll lose revenue if he can’t
make his deadline.
But there may be a solution: On the other
side of the country, another hop supplier
growing the same variety has had a
bumper year and needs to unload his
product before it goes bad. What will
happen to Dave? Will he be able to
defend his title? Will the competition
organizers be able to draw the crowds
they need? Will the alternate hop
supplier find his customer? Find out
in the exciting conclusion…
When last we left our heroes, all was not
well. Fortunately, when the shipment was
stopped at customs, Dave and his team
were notified immediately.
Develop a complication. There’s
nothing like raising the stakes.
When picking up the story, recall the
original premise to refresh the audi-
ence’s memory.
STORY STRUCTURE
Reveal a solution, but make sure it’s
not an easy one. This secondary chal-
lenge raises the stakes for the hero
and keeps the audience on edge.
Bring the story to a head, laying out
all the stakes for all the characters.
Cliffhanger: It’s at this point in the story you can break to explain how the tech-
nology works. The audience will be left in a state of suspense, wondering what
becomes of the characters, while you provide background on the solution. This
serves two purposes: You privilege your audience with information the charac-
ters don’t have, and you provide the hard data you must share.
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